Date: December 26, 2006 04:55 pm Title: so this is the new year
Really enjoying this story...great idea about the yearbook photo cluing Karen in. She's no fool...how long can they keep it believable that she'd be blind on the show? Seriously. Anyway, can't wait for the next installment.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it, Colette...we've seen how competetive Karen is on the show so I can only imagine what her reaction will be when she finds out. Thanks for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: December 26, 2006 03:15 pm Title: so this is the new year
I definately love this. The storyline is very good, and I'm anticipating the party. Plus, I like the little bits of The New Year by Death Cab. Definately is the perfect mood for this story. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, static...i've loved that song for three years and I'm glad to finally be able to incorporate it into a fic.
Date: December 26, 2006 02:41 pm Title: explosions off in the distance
ohh! i'm *loving* this. totally loving it. i like the interaction and whatnot. good stuff. definitely looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it! Chapter 6 should hopefully be up today.
Date: December 26, 2006 02:26 pm Title: explosions off in the distance
Can I tell you how much I love this story! I was so excited to see a new chapter when I logged in. Yay! Love the chapter titles, too.
Author's Response: Thanks, kaystar! I'm so, so glad you like it. Now that the slow, party-planning is over, the drama can begin!
Date: December 25, 2006 09:04 pm Title: the clanking of crystal
UGH, WIP, Noooooo. Please write more now. I am so excited about a New Year's Eve party and, hello, I just love this! You had so many things right and can I just say how much I love Uncomfortable!Jim and I am dying to read about the party! Okay, that whole diatribe was suspiciously Kelly-like, but I really am enjoying this so far. Please let us know when you update on TWOP. Please update soon. AHHHH.
Author's Response: I am really glad you're liking this, GreenFish. I couldn't wait to get all of the introductory stuff out of the way so that I can finally write the party. I should have Chap. 6 today! Thank you for reviewing!
Date: December 25, 2006 07:14 pm Title: the clanking of crystal
Oooo... you got me! I neeeed to know what comes next, especially with that tantalizing "M" rating!
Date: December 25, 2006 06:21 pm Title: the clanking of crystal
69 cups -- this is great -- Pam and Karen as buddies = lots of Squirming!Jim and the not-so-far-off sound of an oncoming train.
Date: December 25, 2006 02:13 pm Title: the clanking of crystal
I love that you've even included the little "um"s and "uh"s in the dialogue. Very realistic. I can see this happening (in fact, I wish it would happen). Write more soon!