I have now read all of your stories, and as it turned out, I saved the best for last. I loved this story and all of the attention and detail you put in it. Fantastic!

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I loved this story!

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I loved this story so much. It was well thought out, and executed IC. Well done!

Lovely. I must say I didn't expect them to end up at a Star Wars marathon when I started this story. But the extended journal gift is amazing.

I know this story is a year old but I just found it (I'm working my way through all of your stories) and had to review it. This is without a doubt my absolute favorite Jim & Pam story. I am in awe of this, seriously. The detail and thought that went into the gifts was wonderful. I laughed, I cried. I'm having a hard time finding the words to tell you how much I loved this. And I want those ornaments, they sound gorgeous! You are an amazing and gifted writer. Thank you for sharing your gift. :o)

Damn Michael and his earliness!

Haha, when Jim asks if he has any "discriminating marks," I think you meant to say "incriminating."

 I am adoring this whole thing, madame moxie.

i'm pretty sure i started reading this five hours ago, it is past four in the morning right now, and i am seeing two of everything, and my back hurts, and i know i'm going to be feeling it tomorrow.... so i guess what i'm trying to say is, Thanks. It was wonderful.

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How in the world did I not leave a review for this story?!?   This is one of my very favorite stories.  I patiently waited for each chapter.  Okay, not so patiently.  This a beautiful story and it is awesome to see their love unfold in the way we all want it to.  Amazing job :)

This is the absolute epitome of a JAM story, and it is also absolutely my favorite story here. Everything is done perfectly which explains the fact that I read the entire thing in one sitting.

The dialogue seemed very smooth and never forced. I had no trouble at all picturing Pam becoming this independent and only wish it would happen on NBC in such a manner. The playful teasing of Jim and Pam was back in full force, and it felt very natural. The pacing wasn’t rushed, and moved along exactly as it should. I never found myself skipping ahead or trying to get through dull parts, as each chapter seemed more engaging than the last. What I also appreciate is how you portrayed Karen. It could have been easy to make her try to sabotage the relationship of Jim and Pam, but you didn’t. In fact, you had her understand, and even offer some words of advice to Jim. That removed any guilt I had for what Jim had done to her and let me focus on the true part: the JAM storyline of course!

After each chapter, I let myself further believe that Pam was the secret admirer, but there was still always that small shred of doubt. Fortunately, she was, and the ending became phenomenal. The fact that Pam was that in love with Jim that she gave him the ring as a sign of commitment really finished off the story in a fantastic manner.

I also love the gift ideas, and their methods of delivery, and might find myself “borrowing” from them in the near future.

You took a modern romantic storyline and turned it into a classic. This has all the great ingredients of a classic love story, and one that I am sure to find myself reading far into the future. The smut was tasteful, as always, and what would a Moxie story be without any?

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I don't have too much time to read or write, but once I started reading this one there was no stopping.  I loved the characterization here - nothing felt off.  You have a gift!

just... wonderful. amazing. stunning. i LOVE it. definately one of my favorite stories here. the end is BEAUTIFUL with them all dressed up and everything being resolved. i could just feel the love between the two of them. you did such a great job being true to their characters. thank you SO much for this amazing story that kept me checking the Most Recent page for days! 

And it was all revealed just as it ought to have been! Very sweet ending :)

Excellent Excellent Excellent. Loved every chapter