Reviews For The Beginning
Reviewer: Dede Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2007 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 1: The New Girl
Date: January 21, 2007 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 1: The New Girl
The spitball wars are perfect. I like the pace, and the voices are spot-on! Keep it up!
Reviewer: Chicgeek Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2007 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 1: The New Girl
Date: January 08, 2007 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 1: The New Girl
I love this ending! I don't see Jim as love at first sight but obviously he warmed up to her quickly! Good characterizationz!
Reviewer: Chicgeek Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2007 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 1: The New Girl
Date: January 08, 2007 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 1: The New Girl
I love this ending! I don't see Jim as love at first sight but obviously he warmed up to her quickly! Good characterizationz!
Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2007 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 2: Just a Receptionist?
Date: January 05, 2007 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 2: Just a Receptionist?
This is really cute so far :)
Reviewer: girl7 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04, 2007 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 1: The New Girl
Date: January 04, 2007 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 1: The New Girl
Nice job on your first fic! I gotta tell you, you have Michael Scott's voice nailed. Loved the line comparing him to a ringleader - such an apt description. And how believable that Jim and Pam would bond on her first day because he rescued her from Michael. Oh, and the last line made me grin.
Keep writing!