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Reviewer: citrus_scented Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2008 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this... The last one is sad. But well-written! I enjoyed young!Jim. Good work; keep it up.

Reviewer: sefi Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was just really well written and just made me so sad for Jim.

Reviewer: Astraea Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

So, this just broke my heart in the best possible way. I think the second one is my favorite. Jim realizing a potential that just never gets fulfilled. *cries* And, of course, five is great too. Love.

Reviewer: Semby Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2007 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, Jim. Such a dreamer. The last one, the last sentence, was devastating. I actually think I like the pre-Pam ones the most. I like seeing young, naive Jim. And the baby-sitter one was adorable!

Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2007 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

 These were all great (Jim is progressing quite well with the clarinet made me laugh out loud), but five is so powerful. The last line is wonderful.

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2007 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

I thought this story was very humanizing.  It's interesting how we have these great "perceptions" of how everything is going to be when we get older and so many times, we're so wrong about all these things that we think are going to happen.  *sigh*  Poor Jim ....

Reviewer: DinkinFlicka Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2007 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really liked this.  So in character, always getting ahead of himself :)

Reviewer: Team_Pam Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2007 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh man, that last line in that last "time"... heartbreaking :( I look forward to reading more from you.

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