Reviews For After
Reviewer: Night Swept Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: April 09, 2007 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is awesome. The parallel real/imagined story is skillfully done, and you're light and dark images are all very strong. You should write more!
Reviewer: lano Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2007 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: January 08, 2007 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
There's a real quality to this that makes you feel almost drunk when you're reading it, if that makes sense? Jim's drunken depression was palpable.
Reviewer: Kath Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2007 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: January 08, 2007 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dark and painful...which I imagine is what you were going for. Nicely done.