Date: February 01, 2007 03:34 am Title: Numbered
You already know I'm in basic awe of the brilliance of this fic, so this is just a simple review - I love, love, loved the chapter title of Parched.
OK, fine, I've got more; I love what Pam's doing, because I imagine that's what Jim did when he first got to Stamford - except of course not with experimental classes and things, but more of just work. [maybe that's why everyone thought he was kiss-up, back in Stamford?] I also adore that we didn't see a thing of what happened that summer in the show, so this is basically an imaginary situation that's completely believable and in-character. Awesome.
Also, Numbered is possibly my favourite chapter, because I adore the recurring theme - 120. The second one is Abandoned. Goodness.
Can't wait for another five hundred words! Keep writing, this is probably my favourite incomplete fic on-site at the moment.
Date: February 01, 2007 01:16 am Title: Numbered
Oh my goodness, this story is like crack, I can't get enough! This is such a brilliant concept! I can't wait to see what you do with it! Keep 'em coming, lol!
Date: January 31, 2007 08:16 pm Title: Numbered
I registered just so i could comment on this. I usually just pass by the multi-chapter stories that have yet to be completed, but I happened upon this when I was extremely bored and sick in bed.
For the past few days, I've come on to the site specifically hoping that there'd be more to this story. I've gotten my fiance into it too. It's my favorite.
Thank you!
Date: January 31, 2007 07:44 pm Title: Numbered
Man. This stops just as it gets interesting. Figures. I agree with what kath said on TWOP, I'm really glad you're naming the chapters, because it makes it a lot easier to remember where I left off when you update. Because now I have to read more!! Gah.
Your title is so perfect.
Author's Response: ooh! THANKS! and hey, do you think i can i get a link? i never know what you guys are talking about over on TWOP. but i just registered, so it'd be awesome to have a place to start!
Date: January 31, 2007 05:53 pm Title: Numbered
I'm going to say this again because it's really the only thing I can think of to say (beyond I LOVE IT and IT IS AMAZING) - MORE MORE MORE. <3
Date: January 31, 2007 05:44 pm Title: Numbered
wow, this just keeps better and better. i seriously love it. keep going and go quickly!
Date: January 31, 2007 05:06 pm Title: Numbered
Yes, a hearty second that I'm dying for more chapters, too! Also, I want to tell you how amazed I am at the introspection you are able to convey in each batch of 100 words. Freaking beautiful.
Date: January 31, 2007 04:20 pm Title: Expansive
wow, this is the single best story I have ever read. no joke. keep writing! its awesome
Date: January 31, 2007 04:03 pm Title: Numbered
Oh my god, I have to say that you have some of the cruelest cliffhangers of any author on this site. What's on the paper! Ahh! Dying! Great chapters.
Date: January 31, 2007 10:43 am Title: Abandoned
Day-um, girl! Good job - please update soon!
Date: January 31, 2007 03:58 am Title: Abandoned
I'm really loving the premise to this story. Pam is giving Jim a taste of his own medicine! I can't wait to see where this goes!
Date: January 30, 2007 08:58 pm Title: Impractical
mm. nice taste in music, that boy has :)
10 [Report This]Date: January 30, 2007 08:35 pm Title: Abandoned
I love this whole story! I really love Dwight in it. I think a lot of people see Pam as having the blame in this whole ordeal. They don't really think about how Jim never really gave her time ot just think....so, great job in showing that!
Date: January 30, 2007 08:11 pm Title: Abandoned
Fantastic! I *loved* the bit where Dwight was trying to let Pam know via code that Jim had found the Jell-o mold. Spot-on for our beloved beet farmer, I tell you.
Date: January 30, 2007 07:29 pm Title: Abandoned
MORE. Seriously, I may be horrible about reviewing, but I know what I like and I like this and I want more just as soon as you can give it. Ka-peech?
<3
Date: January 30, 2007 07:02 pm Title: Abandoned
Whoa. That was like Dark!Pam. I like her.
10 [Report This]Date: January 30, 2007 05:58 pm Title: Abandoned
Shit!!!!
Date: January 30, 2007 05:47 pm Title: Abandoned
This is what it feels like to be abandoned. Ouch. So freaking true. I cannot freaking wait to see what else you have in store. (I'm going to have like 20 chapters when I get home from the hospital!!!)
Date: January 30, 2007 05:45 pm Title: Impractical
Another appearance by the iPod of truth!! Love the name of the playlist.
Date: January 30, 2007 05:27 pm Title: Application
Ahh....Jim...it kind of hurts, huh? Great job! Can't wait to hear more!
Date: January 30, 2007 05:07 pm Title: Abandoned
this is so clever, and interesting. i particulalry like the phrases "unholy confection" and all of dwight's different meanings of "he found the jello" these literally had me laughing out loud. my sister now thinks i'm deranged becasue i'm supposed to writing an english paper, but instead i'm laughing at my computer ;)
Date: January 30, 2007 05:03 pm Title: Application
Dwight trying to use code names for the Jello was AMAZING!!! I'm so addicted to this story! PLEASE update soon, I can't wait to see what Jim does now!
Date: January 30, 2007 02:29 pm Title: Abandoned
wow - please keep going! (and quickly) seriously? i think this is one of my favorite stories (don't tell moxie tho...) so it deviates from what we expect from pam. so what? i think that is a GOOD thing. i think you still stay true to the characters and it is about freakin time jim got a taste of his own medicince, just like pam's been getting a taste of hers on the show. so, you go fickle. bombdiggity, yo.
Date: January 30, 2007 02:12 pm Title: Vibration
I giggled at Dwight's deflated "he found the jello". Still enjoying a ton!
Date: January 30, 2007 09:47 am Title: Application
More! More!