9 [Report This]Date: December 26, 2007 11:08 am Title: Chapter 5
Jim Halpert in a white leisure suit has got to be one of my favorite mental pictures! This was very well done!
10 [Report This]Date: January 30, 2007 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 5
I really liked it! I don't normally like original characters but Sadie was well-written and seemed to fit in effortlessly with Jim's backstory. Good stuff!
Date: January 29, 2007 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hah! Such a cute twist! I loved this! Thank you for sharing it!
Date: January 29, 2007 09:21 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow now that was a twist hearing it was Jim's idea. Loved the 70s party theme.
Date: January 29, 2007 12:19 am Title: Chapter 5
seriously, the only review i can give you is this: it can't possible be done, right? there is too much more to this!!! more more more!!! otherwise i loved it. and the twist at the end that this was jim's idea? nice! more more more.
Date: January 28, 2007 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 5
This was an awesome story, and the fact that it was your first fic is quite impressive! The twist that Jim was in on it was such a sweet surprise. I hope we see more from you.
Date: January 28, 2007 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
AH! Love that Jim was behind it all! And overall, the whole angle, about Pam being worried about Jim being mad at her is a novel approach. Nicely done. Looking forward to seeing more from you. Perhaps an epilogue where Pam does invite Jim in? Maybe for dinner, a movie, Parcheesi?
Author's Response:
I was actually considering an epilogue, and I may write it yet-- but in the meantime, I have a few hundred lines of Beowulf to translate. Sadly, fanfic continuations will have to wait.
Thanks for your review/suggestion!
8 [Report This]Date: January 28, 2007 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was a great first story! I can't wait to read your next one. And the twist at the end - didn't see that coming!!
9 [Report This]Date: January 28, 2007 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 5
wow! That little twist at the end was great! I do kind of wish we could have known more about Pam's reaction to it all! I love Sadie too and the whole back story with her and jim....great job!
Date: January 28, 2007 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
wow, i was suprised by the end.... jim is very cunning :) enjoy it. good job for a first!
10 [Report This]Date: January 28, 2007 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ahaha! I thought the ending was great. Good to know Jim can still set up a scheme, right? Great story, thanks for writing it!
Date: January 28, 2007 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow, I did not see that last twist coming. Hee. Great story - sweet, without being over the top. I kinda love that Pam and Jim didn't spend the night together. As much as I love the idea of some Disco lovin', I still think Pam wouldn't quite go there yet. Nice job!
10 [Report This]Date: January 27, 2007 11:26 am Title: Chapter 4
Um, I'm completely obsessed with this story, and everytime I see a new chapter my heart pretty much leaps. This is so good, and I really can't wait for more!
Date: January 26, 2007 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 4
Sweet confessions of deeper feelings AND Jim dressed up in all-out disco? Excellent chapter!
Date: January 26, 2007 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oooh! A '70s party! Jim in a white suit! Pam making a move! I like it! (Oh, and as a "Gilmore Girls" fan, kudos on the title.)
Date: January 26, 2007 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love you for updating when I was read the chapter!! You don't know how happy that made me. =P Seriously. I'm a dork.
And I love you for writing this - Pam having a friend, Pam *being* a friend, Jim having a past [I always knew that something else had to have happened to him before, something like Pam but a little different; there's something so deep about the way he acts and feels and things that I don't think Pam was the first], Jim being a dork [and dressing in a afro and white suit!! I would pay good, good money to see that, I can promise you that] and - everything. I love Sadie, I like Jonathan, I love Dwight and paintball.
I love the final Jim/Pam scene, and I would love to see what happens from there.
This has made me grin a lot more than a lot of things have in a while. Awesome in more ways than one - thanks for writing this!!
Date: January 26, 2007 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 3
I am so loving this story! This chapter was awesome - I loved the conversation betweeen Pam and Sadie. It sounded so real, and Pam sounded so Pam.
Date: January 26, 2007 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
OMG! I just looove this: “I want to be more than that.” And Jim in the white disco suit -- priceless!
10 [Report This]Date: January 26, 2007 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 4
Holy friggen hell!!! That was awesome....!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!
5 [Report This]Date: January 26, 2007 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
More! More! More!
Date: January 26, 2007 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
lol. great stuff. i'm very amused. can't wait for more.
Date: January 26, 2007 10:51 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG... I can't wait for Jim to see Pam....Ohhh such fun!!! Love the story BTW :)
Date: January 26, 2007 10:48 am Title: Chapter 3
Hee! This just gets more and more fun. The Sadie and Pam friendship is really cute, as is Jim, desperate to know what they talk about behind his back. Can't wait for more!
Date: January 26, 2007 07:12 am Title: Chapter 3
EEEEE.... update soon... how's Jim going to react to Pam's outfit?
Date: January 25, 2007 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this first chapter! I hope you continue it!