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Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2007 01:29 pm Title: Pam

The Beach Games chapters are very good!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2007 04:03 pm Title: Pam

This was such an awesome chapter - filled with so many great line - "Why did she fear words when silence was so much more deadly?"  and "Michael lit the fire and she felt herself begin to burn."  I love that she finally decided to put her fears aside and declare how she really felt. 



Author's Response: So glad you liked it. Yeah, I really think Pam's - or anyone's - silence is their worst enemy. So glad she beat it down!

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