Reviews For Growth Is An Erratic Forward Movement
Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2007 01:32 pm Title: Jim
Date: May 21, 2007 01:32 pm Title: Jim
Wow, Beach Games 2, Jim - Really good. I especially like these lines: And he realized, all this time, she might have been - might be - hurting, too. He felt dumb and childish and full of so, so much regret.
Author's Response: Thanks! Just put up Pam's second part and moving on to The Job!
Reviewer: kaystar Signed 
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Date: May 20, 2007 04:05 pm Title: Jim
8 [Report This]Date: May 20, 2007 04:05 pm Title: Jim
Another great chapter! I loved this part - "And he wasn't sure it was ever too late. But he wasn't sure it was time." That says so much.