Date: February 14, 2008 12:19 pm Title: AC/DC
Ahhh three weeks have gone by? That's intense. Aw, Karen's leaving.
8 [Report This]Date: February 09, 2007 09:53 pm Title: AC/DC
Hum...I like how your version of post-Phyllis' wedding is going. Very good.
Date: February 09, 2007 07:15 pm Title: AC/DC
Okay, reading this revealed to me something very disturbing about myself: At first I thought that Karen had taken Pam's teapot -- you know, the teapot (of love, they call it?) -- and I felt positively murderous. Like, alarmingly so.
Mkay - thank god that didn't happen. :o)
I'm still so enjoying this - you do such a great job of building the tension, writing the subtle little moments and details. (Case in point: "inks" on the machine - of course it'd be half burned out at Dunder Mifflin!)
And while I love Rashida and grudgingly like Karen...yes, I'm pleased with where this story appears to be headed. :o)
On to the next chapter!
Date: February 08, 2007 06:45 pm Title: AC/DC
Ok, what deity do I need to pray to or light a candle for to make corporate transfer Karen out of Scranton? Please tell me and I will do it!!!
And I love Angry!Pam. I feel the same way.
Author's Response: You and me both. Thanks for the review!
9 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2007 02:32 pm Title: AC/DC
I really like that Jim caved first. I can't wait until they finally start talking again. I think it is realistic, i could definitly see one of them letting something slip and then just avoiding the issue.
Author's Response: Exactly! Hence my love for donuts and jumper cables. Thanks for the review!
Date: February 08, 2007 11:19 am Title: AC/DC
oooh this is really good, I'm excited to see what happens next!
I just thought you'd want to know that there are HTML tags that didnt code in the first paragraph... :)
Author's Response: Ick, there are. Thanks for the head's up.
Date: February 08, 2007 08:28 am Title: AC/DC
OK, I'm probably evil, but I just love the moment where Jim is trying to be jokey and friendly with both of his women, and neither of them want to be hedged bet and they're both too mad to talk to him. Very nice.
Author's Response: Thanks! And yeah, I felt a little evil writing it too.