You must login (register) to review or leave jellybeans
Reviewer: aurorasmile Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2007 11:47 pm Title: Valentine the Destroyer

I hope you keep this story going!!!!! i love it!!

Reviewer: uncgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2007 01:57 pm Title: Valentine the Destroyer

That was a good first fanfic.  I'm working up my nerve on my first story, so you should be proud of yourself.  I love how she repeated his words back to him.

 

 

Reviewer: OnlyNDreams Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2007 08:00 am Title: Valentine the Destroyer

YAAAAAY! I love how Pam repeated Jim's words from Casino Night, and I loved her gift for him.

Reviewer: shan21 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2007 08:28 pm Title: Valentine the Destroyer

Very nice fic.  I agree with the comment about the formatting, but I managed to get through this without any confusion.

I love that Pam gave him bonus gifts.  

Reviewer: Pseudonym Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2007 07:11 pm Title: Valentine the Destroyer

I love the song-- Old 97s=love.

 There's some funky formatting and I'm not sure if it's intentional or not-- but I think the story would read a little more easily if there were line breaks between the dialogue.

 I really like the parallel between the water bottle and the tea kettle-- nice touch!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2007 07:04 pm Title: Valentine the Destroyer

now thats what needs to happen. if i could, i would describe the sound that i made when she started repeating jims words from casino night.

You must login (register) to review or leave jellybeans