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Reviewer: sherlockelly Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2007 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

I also am skeeved by Pam/Toby.

So... WHY IS THIS SO GOOD???

I swear, you are one my favorite writers on here because you fear not the wrath of JAM. highfive!



Author's Response:

Thanks.  The praise means so much coming from you, who I adore for the kinky, yet extremely funny, entertaining, and enjoyable in its own right smut that you write.

*highfive* right back at ya.

I put a lot of myself into this one, so I think it comes across as more honest and real and tangible.  Because of that, it's my favourite thing I've written in this fandom, so I'm glad that you like it too.

Reviewer: DinkinFlicka Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26, 2007 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ooh, a dark Toby fic? How did I miss this one when you first posted it?

"He plans his next move carefully, tentatively, not wanting (No! Desperately needing but frightful of the consequences) to go too far."

Loved that line, loved that you called Pam "batshit" and that she wouldn't let him kiss her and that he's hoping she'll end things.  

I've never read Toby/Pam portrayed this way, but I have to say that I really enjoyed it.  By far my favorite Toby/Pam fic.  



Author's Response:

Thanks for wandering back into my neck of the woods to read it.

Sometimes I wonder why so many of my ideas turn out this way, though I'm glad that others share my love of the dark (I think I may be turning into a vampire - or not).  Besides casual depression, this is really the only way I see Toby/Pam happening.

I'm so happy that you loved that I called Pam 'batshit'.  I was proud of that one.

Reviewer: shan21 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2007 11:57 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow. So angsty. I like it.


Author's Response: Thanks (you may be the only one).  One of these days I'll write something happy.  Maybe.

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