Date: February 16, 2007 03:44 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh, ouch. I can practically taste the bitter radiating between these two. Good stuff - looking forward to more!
Date: February 13, 2007 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oooh... NOW it's getting good. The first chapter is awesome too, now that it has this one to go along with it. I just hope Pam doesn't push Jim too hard--he might break. :) Great writing--I love this new perspective on Pam. Update soon, please!
8 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2007 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
So many great lines in this chapter. These are 2 of my favorites: "A tenderness with history" and "But now he was laughing and smiling with someone else and what they’d had was starting to feel a little less special."
Date: February 13, 2007 10:52 am Title: Chapter 1
hell yeah! Roy will treat you right Pam! you go girl!
...sorry i guess I'm a little angry at Jim
I have a feeling this is the way that things are going to be on the show...
but anyways, this was great
9 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2007 09:24 am Title: Chapter 1
ok, that broke my heart. The worst part is that i think you captured what Pam was thinking perfectly.