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Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16, 2007 03:44 am Title: Chapter 2
Date: February 16, 2007 03:44 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh, ouch. I can practically taste the bitter radiating between these two. Good stuff - looking forward to more!
Reviewer: LindsayLeigh Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13, 2007 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
Date: February 13, 2007 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oooh... NOW it's getting good. The first chapter is awesome too, now that it has this one to go along with it. I just hope Pam doesn't push Jim too hard--he might break. :) Great writing--I love this new perspective on Pam. Update soon, please!