Date: June 26, 2007 04:42 pm Title: Separate Ways
Well... not sure what to think of all that. Obviously Jim is feeling left out and Pam just wants to make sure all is well before saying anything. Kind of a sticky situation there. I kind of feel bad for both of them. But hopefully they will work something out and maybe there will definitely be good news too? I'm so glad you put up another chapter. Thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting! I'm not really sure what to think of it either. There will be another chapter up soon to help smooth this icky chapter over. Keep reading and commenting. I love it! Thanks!
Date: June 25, 2007 07:01 pm Title: Separate Ways
I love this story, but honestly that last bit with Jim seemed really OOC...but what do I know? We all have our moments right? Jim can't always be perfect.
can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I agree with you actually. My only excuse for Jim's behavior change is because first off, he's an hour and a half away from his family, tired, has a potential problem and thinks Pam is keeping something from him. I would act a little weird too if that was the case. So, I think it was very perceptive of you to notice that he has kinda switched moods here. I appreciate the review and hope to see you tune in for the next chapter where it gets resolved.
Date: June 25, 2007 04:22 pm Title: Separate Ways
I really love this story, and I almost forgot about it since its been so long. I knew like right away that she was pregnant, I was just waiting for you to confirm it. Great story, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I kinda like this story too. Ha. Thanks again for your thoughts and your comment. I hope to keep adding to this story in the next week or so. I'm pumped about the future for this family and let's just hope getting past this little bump in the road will be over with soon. Keep up the reading!
Date: June 25, 2007 04:08 pm Title: Separate Ways
Ooh, this story is getting really compelling again! I am excited for the next bit!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope it starts getting back into the swing of things. I really want to finish this story in a good way. I have ideas and alot of great helpers to thank for getting me back to writing on it. Thanks for the comment and keep reading! There's more on the way shortly.
10 [Report This]Date: June 25, 2007 03:35 pm Title: Separate Ways
So, I have three fics open to read, and then I get GMail telling me this was updated, and it was a giant burst of energy. And so also yeah, I am reading it. And so when I don't get anything done tonight - it is ALL your fault. And hopefully I will reply to emails soon. I really should at least change my sheets though. At least act like I am productive.
I can agree with that last miles taking forever. I travel 3+ hours to get home from college, and every time, I think I am making good time and I will be home lickety split, but it takes forever as always. And its like, once I get on the main interstate the last one, it is like, what, I always think there are less miles to go than there are.
"a dainty, sweet, and gorgeous young woman" How I wish I was those things. Well, I can believe I am sweet. And, I am a young woman... but oh well. My fic self can be!
Every time I see my name I just grin and smile and giggle. It is making reading this take so much longer, but so much more enjoyable.
You used the phrase toe-headed. I totally learned that phrase from Full House!!!
And Dave looks like Jim, in all the best ways!!! Wow, I think my dog thinks I am on crack or something with all the happy noises coming from me!
I am totally in love with Dave, and Pam (might be) pregnant! How great is this chapter!!!
So, Jim totally sounds like my friend Katie who I got in an argument with yesterday, nearly the exact same thing. Except, it wasn't I am pregnant and that sort of stress, it was real life stress, and she totally sounded like Jim. it was like, "whoa, reading an im conversation here." And she just signed off and said goodnight like that. So, um, are you really either Katie or are you spying on my IM logs? Because, seriously, whoa.
Write more or else I will hunt you down and tie you to your computer. And trust me, I will.
Author's Response:
Glad that you were pumped about it. I'm happy that you like Jessica and are overflowing with joy. I'm hoping that these next few chapters really help push the story forward. Thanks again for the help. Oh, and I hope you like Dave. I think I might add a little bit in an upcoming chapter about how they met....(so, be prepared for a cute little moment there.)
Anywho, thanks again for the review. YOu're great and I hope channelling Kelly Kapoor is okay. It was just something that flowed out of me. And, well, your bubbly personality helped too. :)