Date: May 01, 2022 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 5
Beautiful story. I love the way you gave the background of her various pieces. I also love the ending and her drawing of their hands together.
1 [Report This]Date: December 01, 2020 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
I LOVE the way you wrapped this up - and not just because you cleared the decks for them to be together. You end up basically giving us a tour of their entire relationship from first meeting to first real date. Her discovering herself in that exact same spot from the lunch and actually doing what she vowed to do... and then him remembering it? Too sweet.
And her letting him know she loves him through a sketch is VERY appropriately JAM.
9 [Report This]Date: March 06, 2007 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
Lovely, lovely story. I loved that Jim remembered what Pam said about painting the building and how Pam finally told Jim. How's that for courage, Gil??? ;-)
Date: March 06, 2007 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh, I love it WBJ! You have so many great details in here-- my favorite being the ham & cheese sandwich thing. Very clever! And it just adds a whole new dimension to the fact that Jim started eating tuna in Stamford.
Niiiiiiice [/kevin]
Date: March 06, 2007 04:15 am Title: Chapter 5
this was.... amazing. It was sad and happy and everything. I felt so sorry for Jim at the beginning (best first date also his worst), and then Pam and the rain and then the end with the picture, and....
great/amazing/everything else. and a possible sequel = there better be!
Date: March 06, 2007 12:57 am Title: Chapter 5
Aww! This was very creative! I loved the inspirations to Pam's art. They are now canon in my mind. Sequel? You don't even have to ask, haha! Please write it!
Date: March 05, 2007 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 5
Very nice, WildBerryJam. I love the paragraph describing the sketch, and just the general idea that the watercolors at the art show had more meaning than they seemed to.