Reviews For Things that aren't
Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2007 04:12 pm Title: Too Early
Date: March 06, 2007 04:12 pm Title: Too Early
normally i don't like drabbles, but these aren't bad (sorry, still not my favorite form)
Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2007 02:12 pm Title: Too Early
Author's Response: Thanks , I missed that when I was going over it and fixed. Glad you like it .
Date: March 06, 2007 02:12 pm Title: Too Early
In the 2nd sentence"say" should be "saying".
Oh, how stressful when you first say those 3 little words. Will they say it back? A few months IS pretty early when you're not sure what the other person's thinking. Especially when you think they might be thinking about --- Pam!
I like how Jim changes to "I really like you too..." Karen, he's just not that into you. I also like that she immediately challenges him on it - "what does that even mean Jim?" I could definitely see her doing that.
Author's Response: Thanks , I missed that when I was going over it and fixed. Glad you like it .