Reviews For The Boy Within
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Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2007 12:02 pm Title: Every day a new adventure

Oh, this is cute!  Yay for young Jim.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like!

Reviewer: DinkinFlicka Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2007 09:55 am Title: Every day a new adventure

Loved it!  Great job with the prompts, you worked them in seamlessly :) I love seeing Jim hanging out with friends, not always pining,hehe. 

Author's Response: Glad you loved it! Thanks again for the prompts and now the review!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2007 07:03 am Title: Every day a new adventure

Jim back story, Jim as little boy, Jim as babe-in-the-woods college grad, Jim with pre-cursor mismatched gf, Jim meets Pam...all good, and those weren't even your 5 elements. Very sweet.

Author's Response: Hehe.. I just realized, I kocked most of my elements in the first half of the story! I'm glad you liked, Colette!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2007 06:29 am Title: Every day a new adventure

Christie -- the pre-Karen!  I hope her time was short!  Hee!  Very nice  ;o)

Author's Response: Oh yeah, he dumped her the week after their mini-reunion. Just didn't have time to figure out how to work it into the story. :-) Jim was smart back then, he knew when a relationship was doomed. Oh, young!Jim, if only you could warn your future self just like Dwight can...

Author's Response: Wait, nevermind, realized that it's future!Dwight that warns him... oops! Well, you get what I mean.

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2007 05:44 am Title: Every day a new adventure

hehe - I'll review even without the cast mention.  :-)  That was a great little slice of Jim life.  And I really need the breath of fresh air that was Old!Happy!Jim.  Where is that boy???   Doesn't he know how much he's needed??

Great work! 



Author's Response: I'm sayin'! While bored-out-of-his-mind disgruntled!Jim is still pretty sexy, I'm seriously missing our  Happy!not-so-serious!Jim. And I truly believe Pam is the only solution to this problem. Hey writers of the show, are you listening??? Thanks for taking time out of writing your own awesome stories to review, Moxie!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2007 05:22 am Title: Every day a new adventure

Haha, it was a funny story. Nice history for the characters.

I am feeling like Jim was at first. I am about to graduate and like, crap, I have to become a grownup like now. And all my friends are already grown ups. Why can't I age backwards? 



Author's Response: I ask myself that question almost every day. It's been a little while since I graduated, but I'm about to move out of my parent's house and across the country, and it scares me to death. I'm one of those people that never wanted to grow up and is still trying to hang on to carelessness of childhood, so I decided, hey, Jim!fic I can relate to! So glad you liked!

Reviewer: Beth Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2007 10:22 pm Title: Every day a new adventure

wow, i really liked that story!  Many of the improve fics I've read have a few parts that aren't really connected to the story just to get all the elements in. I didn't feel that way at all with this story....you did a really great job!  I enjoyed the story, it was also very cute!!

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed!

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