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Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2007 09:34 am Title: Coffee

No!  Jim should not answer the phone unless he can say, "It's my Mom" or "Hey, Mark!"  For Karen (if it was her), flip the phone shut.  She'll call back.  (Like a bad penny, Karen will always show up.)

Maryuc, please watch out for my grief bone in future chapters.  We need some hope to offset all the misunderstanding and angst on the real show!!  (Well, I do anyway.) 

Nice writing, though. 



Author's Response: A bad penny?  I've never heard of that!  But I do agree Karen needs to be vaporized.

Reviewer: justy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2007 01:27 am Title: Coffee

Well, that was 30 kinds of awkward, lol. You had me squirming and shifting.

 

Stupid Jim, don't you know not to answer a phone call during an important lunch. Better have been your mother. 

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