Date: April 15, 2007 07:58 am Title: Chapter 1 -- Broken
okay, this is awesome. loving it!!! perhaps an MA rating later on????
Author's Response: Hahah....I don't expect the explicit hot monkey love to go down....(TWSS), but I do anticipate some hot smoochage, at the very least.
Date: March 08, 2007 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 1 -- Broken
I like this. I'm glad to see it's NOT complete - more coming!!!
Karen is not a very good girlfriend in your story - assuming they'll go to dinner, not moving to close the car door (???), and giving him about 2 seconds inside before coming after him. Ugh. Ditch that girl, Jim, and find another. Maybe in the ... kitchen?
Author's Response: Ironically, I don't think Karen was THAT out of line...when you are really coupley with someone, you tend to assume that you will spend a lot of time with them....only problem is, Jim doesn't want to be as "coupley" as she does...
Date: March 08, 2007 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 1 -- Broken
Now this is interesting. I'm intrigued to see where this goes!!
Author's Response: Thanks....um, me, too....I haven't worked the whole thing out yet, so, gulp, let's hope it keeps coming, and nothing too horrible happens.............
Date: March 08, 2007 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 1 -- Broken
Wow! I absolutely love this beginning. I can just picture the expression on Jim's face when he first sees her at his old desk. Please post a new chapter soon! This looks to be a fantastic story!
Author's Response: The Desk of Love is so important, don't you think?
10 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2007 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 1 -- Broken
I really love this idea. Jim needs to see that he's hurt poor Pam and he did! More, please!
Author's Response: Jim has spent the whole season in a Cone of Selfishness. Jim! Come out of there!
Date: March 08, 2007 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 1 -- Broken
Aw, poor Pam! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll keep going!
9 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2007 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 1 -- Broken
"The desk was empty, except for that single pencil, snapped neatly in two." Perfect reaction to the Karen show she just witnessed. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: The Karen Show makes me want to break things, too.
Date: March 08, 2007 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 1 -- Broken
Ooh. Great start! I can see something like that happening in canon with Pam and The Desk, and Jim coming upon the scene. And grr to Karen, but I can understand her position too. Can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve!
Author's Response:
Elbows.
Thanks for the review, hope you like the rest!
Date: March 08, 2007 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 1 -- Broken
ooh, I like this idea! I really wanted him to see her crying in Back from Vacation, so I'm glad he saw that. They both need something to spur them into action! :)
Author's Response: Jim needs a blatant reminder that he is not the only individual in the world with feelings and emotions.
10 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2007 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 1 -- Broken
I really like your stories a lot, Maybe Once! I never find myself reading them and thinking, "That would never happen". Great start with this one, can't wait to see where it's headed!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks a lot!
Date: March 08, 2007 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 1 -- Broken
Poor Pam... more please! I finished my midterms and I need some fanfic (even if it is all angsty)
Author's Response: At least my angst comes with a before-the-fact promise of a happy ending.....