Date: April 14, 2007 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG! This is amazingly ridiculous! Please, please, please continue!
Date: April 12, 2007 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hahaha, the *jungle* gym, and the innocent helpless kittens, are hilarious. Can't wait to see what else you come up with!
Date: April 10, 2007 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
LadyLuck, I think you had a cut-and-paste problem; your first couple of lines are from further down...?
And there were just a couple of errors/typos - the DVDs should be calling "our name", not "out name", and it's "rarin' (as in raring) to go". "Rearing to go" is a common misspelling, but it really is "raring".
I'm enjoying this story. I really liked all the Angela aspects - checking out Dwight, bringing out the kittens and being so distraught about it, etc.
The kiddie pool was funny too. Dwight's reaction reminded me of last week when he realized (immediately) that the Sheriff's citation (or whatever) was a kiddie thing! Nice parallel!
Dwight would be good on the challenges and fire-starting (probably). Social skills? Yeah, not so much.
Author's Response: oh, the first couple of lines are the chapter summary; it's what shows up underneath the chapter in the table on contents. unfortunately, it also shows up right above the story so it looks really awkward :P
Date: April 10, 2007 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
You have to let us know how Dwight does on his challenges! This is fun! I like that Jim and Pam are up to their pranks again!
10 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2007 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
LOL ! I'm loving the kiddy pool && the streamers. And the fact Jim and Pam are happy. And the kittens. And the jungle gym. Damn it, I love the whole thing!!! =)