Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11, 2007 11:56 am Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
Date: March 11, 2007 11:56 am Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
That's pretty good; we don't read that many stories where Jim has his way with her and just leaves. I would totally cry if I were Pam after that; how dissatisfying. I mean, the memory of how good it was would just linger ---- and then him just walking away, man.
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 
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Date: March 11, 2007 11:40 am Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
Author's Response: Well said. :)
10 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2007 11:40 am Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
allow me to be the first to comment with this insightful little note:
fkjgh.
you know it.
Author's Response: Well said. :)