Date: March 30, 2007 08:59 pm Title: Avoidance
Yeah! This turned out so great -- you did a wonderful job with all of it. Thanks for letting me get a sneak peek!
Author's Response: hehe thanks! thanks for all the help also!
Date: March 23, 2007 04:40 pm Title: Avoidance
That Wii storyline is really clever. Karen can't catch a break. She loves video games and Jim didn't even invite her along. Ouch! Its great when a story makes you feel bad for someone you're supposed to hate or visa versa. Great job!
Author's Response:
Haha, nope. Poor Karen. I think I grew more sympatethic for her over writing this story. I don't always hate her, it depends. I think I mainly feel sorry for her because she is going to get hurt eventaully. because eventually jim and pam have to get together (RIGHT NBC!?)
and the wii is because i really think i want one. even thouh i haven't played video games since like nintendo 64 first came out
Date: March 14, 2007 06:52 pm Title: Avoidance
Ok Emily, you win! What's the secret! Now you've left me hanging.....you must write more - quickly! Really love the story though and can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Haha, I have more written, and will probably post the next chapter tomorrow.
I am really hoping that everyone actually likes the secret, cause I hope its not a letdown.
Date: March 14, 2007 02:43 pm Title: Avoidance
Hey EmilyHalpert! I'm reviewing I love your story!! =) Keep writing I'd love to hear what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks! I have the next section written, I will post it soon :)
Date: March 14, 2007 02:10 pm Title: Avoidance
hmm... I hope Jim is going to be doing something related to Pam!
Author's Response: Well, it will eventually be a JAM story... I have the next few chapters written, and Pam isn't in them. But, trust me, eventually, there will behappy JAMness. I can't stand to see those two unhappy.
10 [Report This]Date: March 14, 2007 02:05 pm Title: Avoidance
OOOOh, my guess is he's spending a wild night with Meridith..right? hahahaha
Author's Response: Hum, didn't think of that possibility. but... nope. Not with Meredith.
Date: March 14, 2007 01:45 pm Title: Avoidance
I want! I want!
I love this: “Damn, what is it going to take to drive this woman away?” Your Karen is not getting much of a clue. And where IS Jim spending all this time? In his own apartment, shades drawn and lights out?
Love "Pam Patch". Almost as good as Pam Pong. Hmm, am I the only one who can think of more meanings for Pam Patch? One of them being somewhere Jim would really like to be? Okay, just me. (Please don't throw garbage at me.)
Anyway, get crackin'. More, please.
Author's Response:
Yay! Well, I do have more written, and I do have about 5 chapters planned (course, that still isn't the end), so once I read it over a few more times I will put it.
I think I am making my Karen kinda desperate and stuff. Not sure where, but she just came out like that.
Jim's secret will be revealed shortly. ... hehe.
Haha, so glad you enjoyed Pam Patch. It was just a spur of the moment thought.
I will probably post about a chapter a day or so until I am done with Spring Break. And then it will depend on how much free time I get (or, how much free time I make. I am a firm believer that fanfic is more important than school. shame my teachers aren't sold on the idea.)