1 [Report This]Date: January 27, 2019 10:18 am Title: Unrealized Beauty
This is a nicely positioned reveal!
Date: March 17, 2007 09:11 am Title: Unrealized Beauty
I enjoy this contemplative Jim, just enjoying being out in nature and taking pictures. I enjoyed the part about the gift for Karen. Your Jim is definitely not very "into" your Karen.
I laughed at the part about Pam and the bit of song you threw in there. It's very sweet to think about Jim still dreaming about a future with Pam. (Oh, yeah, I'm a bit of a Jammer.)
Thanks for the shout-out. I like to make people's days!
For a beta, some people mark themselves as beta-ers in their profiles. I don't know if there's a way to request one from the powers at be at MTT, but you could check that out. Also, if you are on TWoP (I only lurk, myself), people ask for beta-ers on the fanfic thread. You actually do very well un-beta'd, though.
Looking forward to seeing what happens with Karen at some point. Willing to wait as it unfolds, though!
Author's Response:
Haha, no, my Jim isn't into my Karen. Well, this is going to eventually be a JAM fic, so, I can't have them be all happy, now can I?
Yay someone else caught the lyrics. It just popped in my head. And thenunfortionatly, got stuck in my head.
I had some betas for a previous fic, but most of them are busy for this week. So, maybe starting soon, I can get some. Or I may start browing random profiles. Most of my problems are with tense changes. It gets more obvious in the coming chapters. I already caught a few of them, but yeah.
I have a bit more written, and Karen is dealt with eventually.
Also, jut want to make sure you know, I did two chapters today. Since you replied to the first of two, just wanted to make sure. But it was two today, because I don't think I will be able to do any tomorrow. Depends on how fussy it is reconnecting my internet when I get back at school
Date: March 17, 2007 08:29 am Title: Unrealized Beauty
Hey I love this vreative side of Jim! Very cool! = ) Rating it a 10 btw <3 Sorry i have no money tyo spare for a camera haha
Author's Response: darn, well, reviews and ratings are still nice, even if its not a fancy new camera. I am like second away from posting the next chapter, so yay! iwas about to do it and then mom distracted me. so yeah. :)