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Reviewer: OpalArk Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 05:10 am Title: Dearest, darling, dumpling-cakes

Awww, last line of that chapter made me smile too.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I think this chapter's probably my favorite so far too.

Reviewer: Anoel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2007 04:54 pm Title: Dearest, darling, dumpling-cakes

Awwww I love this! So cute how Michael would call her super early and be all romantic about how he can't be without her. And I love Jan smiling at the end :)


Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it. I had a lot of fun with this one.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2007 01:00 pm Title: Dearest, darling, dumpling-cakes

So perfectly Jan.  I think just about every one of their phone conversations ends like this.  Jan just says something then hangs up.  You are doing a great job with these characters.

Author's Response: You should see the grin on my face right now! Remember when Jim comes back and Pam can't stop smiling. That's what reviews do to me. I'm so glad you like it. And since I'm in such a great mood I think I'll go ahead and post the next chapter now instead of waiting until I get home from work, like I'd been planning to do.

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