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Reviewer: bee sly Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2008 07:14 pm Title: Closer

I love Death Cab! Very well done!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2007 01:42 pm Title: Closer

late night craziness = great fic!

totally could see pam thinking this and stuff.

and i do the same thing, i shuffle my music, and then find the song i really want. and then place it on repeat. which is why it has been played like 5 times more than any other song i own. 

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18, 2007 02:53 pm Title: Closer

This is very nice.  My favorite lines follow; they are just gorgeous:

"She never knew exactly what she said, only saw his face. The way his mouth became an "O" at her words. Saw the wetness in his eyes, and felt it on her face. 

And he looked back, astounded, awed, amazed... sure."

I hope things work out for you, tv_dream! 

Reviewer: uncgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18, 2007 09:20 am Title: Closer

I think that was abolutely amazing!  You did a great job creating palpable tension with your words.  Great piece.

Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 18, 2007 05:24 am Title: Closer

Wow that was great! =)

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