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Reviewer: Joni24 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2007 03:08 pm Title: Composition is key.

I agree with everyone, I really like how you connect everything with Pam's art. Keep writing!

Reviewer: Ozana Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 02:05 pm Title: Composition is key.

This is a good story.  I like the way you are using her artistic "voice".   More please.

Reviewer: Kathrynann Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 11:56 am Title: Composition is key.

You captured Pam's voice really well here.  Loved the flashback, especially the bit about her missing the look on Jim's face when she mentions Roy.  Good job! 

 

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