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Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 03:10 pm Title: Maintain perspective.

Oh, this is a great concept. I love how she can apply the rules of art to her life. I really, really love this line from chapter 1: "If it turned out to be a mistake... well, she’d fix it. She’d change it."

And you kept the Dundies scene just as cute and fun as it was on screen, but the added depth of what was going through Pam's mind at the time worked really well.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 02:21 pm Title: Maintain perspective.

This is really nice.  I like the way you connected the artistic terms with Pam's situation.

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