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Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2007 12:04 pm Title: Keep a strong contrast.

This chapter is so good.  I think you did a great job on the conversation between Pam & Roy!  ...And explaining how Jim knows before he even talks to her that she's decided against it.  Good characterization.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2007 06:58 pm Title: Keep a strong contrast.

I like your view of the conversation between Pam and Roy, since we never got to hear any of that, just see the end of it.  I could definitely see it going down (I know, TWSS) like that.

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2007 07:50 am Title: Keep a strong contrast.

Ahhh.  Boys and Girls.  I love how Jim gets riled up enough to break down and really call her on what she's doing. 

I love the way you are using Pam's art as a way to express what she's thinking.  

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