9 [Report This]Date: April 01, 2007 07:59 pm Title: Honesty, Courage
Great story! I love that Jim still had the napkin and gave it back to her. And the last paragraph sounds like the beginning of happily ever after.
Date: March 28, 2007 09:01 pm Title: Honesty, Courage
Really nice job on this. Realistic, and yet hopeful ending with FNB displaying her courage and honesty. Loved Pam having the courage to place her hand over his on the computer mouse. And how sweet of Jim to remind her of their first "date."
Great job.
Date: March 28, 2007 04:36 pm Title: Honesty, Courage
Yay! Fantastic ending. I think you handled the Roy/Pam after-talk beautifully, and I love the return of the napkin, and that sense of hope in the last line :)
Date: March 27, 2007 03:26 pm Title: Honesty, Courage
Very nice. I like how your Jim tells Pam that Karen knows something. Pam could have been more prepared for Karen's little talk in Ben Franklin if that had happened!
I like that Roy is willing to listen the next morning! That's a nice bit of closure.