Date: April 09, 2007 07:55 pm Title: ORANGE
I really like that you made Roy wonder whether or not "his Pammy" was afraid of him...we've never really seen that on the show, and I've never seen it in fanfic before. Great detail.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: March 27, 2007 11:07 am Title: ORANGE
that was brilliant.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: March 26, 2007 07:01 pm Title: ORANGE
I actually think this is the realisation Roy will come to. It's not Jim, it's Pam, and there's nothing he can do about it. It would be sad if it had to take another DUI and a stint in jail to realise it, but at least Dan'll get something positive out of the situation.
And I'm glad I'm not a guy, and that, baring the unthinkable, I'm good to stay out of jail. Yuck.
Author's Response: Somehow, some way, Roy has to realize that it's Pam who's leaving him, that no one can "take" her away if she doesn't want to go. He's taken her for granted, like his property, for so long. And yeah, I think it will take a night in the tank to shock him out of his thinking. :) Thanks for reading!
Date: March 26, 2007 06:55 pm Title: ORANGE
This definitely rings true, given the discussion with Dan. Roy isn't the quickest guy ever, but he can certainly figure something out with enough information. I really like this line: "And his fists wouldn't change her mind." So true, and with the right circumstances, Roy could figure that out.
Author's Response: Thanks, Kev. :) I'm glad you liked that line.
Date: March 26, 2007 06:25 pm Title: ORANGE
hum, i dunno about if it seems really out of character. i think i could see him doing it, like realizing it like that. i really don't know. but i like the way that dan's story paralleled his own. and i think really roy could be understanding, once he sobered up a bit and stuff. oh i dunno. but you made me feel sorry for roy
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate your opinion. Sometimes a story works, sometimes not; either way, honest feedback is worth its weight in jellybeans. Thanks again!