Reviews For ROYGBIV
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Reviewer: andromeda Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28, 2007 07:14 pm Title: BLUE

I am so glad to see Creed getting some love! This was really fun to read, i really enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Thanks, andromeda. Creed is definitely one of my favorite characters, so he was fun to write about.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2007 06:25 pm Title: BLUE

Loved how you squeezed in Creed at the end. I think Bennie is my new favourite I'll-never-read-about-her-again character. Sometimes only a stranger, albeit a non-objective one, can help in such a situation.

Author's Response: Whoa, you like Bennie! Cool! Thanks! As for Creed, he's so sneaky he creeps in when I'm not looking. :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2007 08:08 pm Title: BLUE

What a great sneaky addition to the story by using Creed's music!  Thank you :)  I'm really enjoying your color experiment here.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, Creed just snuck in. Gotta watch those hippies. :)

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2007 03:08 pm Title: BLUE

Oh, sweet, a message from Pam!  I love that.

I really enjoyed this one - one of my favorites so far. 

One nitpick: I think Creed would not have known Jim's name, or even where he knew him from (as evidenced by:  "Which one is Pam?";  "Thanks, Ace!"; "you take it easy, Ace"; "I'm not good with names."; "Andrea"; "Marybeth"; "the receptionist"; "the redhead".)  I love that you had Creed singing.  I thought his song (which I guess he co-wrote) in A Benihana Christmas was wonderful.

2 more chapters, right?  (Claps like Kelly.) 



Author's Response:

Oh, you guys underestimate Creed. :) He has his moments. I think some of what we're seeing in him is a deliberate act, designed to keep the crazies away. At least that's the way he is in my universe.

And yeah, the song he was singing in Benihana Christmas was his ("Spinnin' and Reelin'"), but it's off a different CD.

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2007 01:07 pm Title: BLUE

Ok this was my favorite color yet.  Your Karen characterization made a lot of sense.  Often she is too nice, or way too bitchy but it was just those tiny things like changing his drinking and making him buy new clothes that I totally bought...and Creed. Gotta love Creed. :)

Author's Response: Of course you love Creed. Who doesn't? :D I even bought his CDs.

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