Date: March 26, 2007 09:26 am Title: Save me
hum, this is an interesting a/u. its cute. :).
and writing everything by and - impressive. i used to do that also, and then typing everything is just second nature :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. I write everything by hand simply because I tend to write little snipets of stories at times that I'm no where near a computer. ^_^
cheers.
--Lex
8 [Report This]Date: March 24, 2007 09:52 pm Title: Save me
Love it! Can't wait to see where it all goes!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I really am excited about where this is going to go...
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 24, 2007 11:11 am Title: Save me
Can't wait to see how they meet up next! Enjoying this.
Author's Response:
I think you'll like it!!
Thanks so much for the review!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 24, 2007 09:53 am Title: Save me
This is a very interesting premise. It seems like Jim and Pam are both in the exact same place they were when they did work together - Jim has trouble committing and is relatively bored with his life, Pam is frustrated with Roy and questions the value of her opinion in the relationship. So, in a sense, they would have gone down these paths anyway without ever knowing each other? Interesting.
I'm curious to see how they will influence each other now, since Pam didn't need Jim to see that her relationship with Roy wasn't right. Great start. I hope you update quickly!
Author's Response:
I think that they have enough in common where they probably would be attracted to each other. Except that they would also fundamentally have the same issues. Which is where the fun is.
And yes, I think that Pam is smart enough to have realized her problems with Roy somewhere down the line. In fact, I think that one of the major reasons she stuck with him for so long was because of Jim being kind of like an relief from her life.
I just wanted to write Jim and Pam my own way, and I'm glad that you're enjoying the story.
Thanks for taking the time to review!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 24, 2007 06:39 am Title: Save me
I like this "what if" story!
A couple super-minor spelling things: you spelled Katie 2 different ways (don't think it matters which way); I think it should be Toucan Sam, not Tucan. The bird is a toucan.
Is it too much to hope that the next chapter has Jim asking Pam out for coffee or something?? Maybe lunch at Cugino's for a little parallel universe action?
And do you really have a spud-gun? Do you think that's safe? What if you were deranged?
Author's Response:
You're right, I did spell Katy's name wrong. Thanks. But it actually is Tucan Sam. That's the way Kellogg's spells it.
The next chapter...I think you'll like it. (psst, here's a secret: there will be several parallel universe situations.)
*pats spud gun* It's a good thing that this is the Internet. That's all I have to say.
^_~
thanks for reviewing!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 24, 2007 06:31 am Title: Save me
Can't provide any concrit, I'm afraid, because I love this story too much, already! - from Count Chocula to the first and last names to the small and easy heart-to-heart before switching back the the bantar - you've got Jim and Pam down, Ms Kensington, and that is quite amazing. I can't wait to see their next meeting!
Also, you should know I'm considering astronaut diapers. They make the wait for updates a lot more manageable.
Author's Response: Hee.
You're making me blush.
I actually can't tell you how much I appreciate you saying all of that because I AGONIZE over how I write already established characters. I don't like stories that go way too OOC, so I try not to commit the same blunders. I also try to remember that they would speak like real people (who are far from perfect). But then again, the way real people speak looks really crappy when written down, so it's a compromise.
And don't worry. I should have the next chapter up next week.
cheers.
--Lex