10 [Report This]Date: April 09, 2007 09:27 pm Title: Orange
“I am trying not to be.” - what a beautifully poignant line. I am really enjoying this story - great job!
Date: April 04, 2007 06:33 am Title: Orange
Ok, I really liked this chapter especially, seeing Roy's perspective post-beatdown (and hearing Kenny surprisingly being the voice of reason) was really refreshing.
The last chapter was well done also, because Jim and Pam are so good at denying their feelings that of course Jim would go get naked with Karen for some comfort before (if he ever does) facing what these new developments/sort-of-discussions mean for him and Pam.
I'm hoping that we'll get more to this story, because as a hardcore J/P shipper (I just can't make myself say JAM)-- I'd love to see a positive resolution (for Jim/Pam and their the-timing-is-always-wrong love) come out of this serious angst.
No matter what, though, I'm definitely along for the ride.
Author's Response:
When I came up with the concept of this fic, I was kind of dreading taking on Roy, but ironically, I loved writing this chapter. Thank you for continuing to read!
Date: March 30, 2007 12:09 pm Title: Orange
Ooh. This is so good. I love the "I am trying not to be"! Is there more? Let's have more!
Date: March 30, 2007 11:12 am Title: Orange
haha, i have never noticed his big ears, but i think that tends to be a common comment about JK. but, no hate from me about that. in an odd way, i sorta feel for roy. i still don't like him, i still think he is horrible, etc. but, i do kinda feel for the dude. he did try. and oh well. but yeah, keep writing
Date: March 30, 2007 10:44 am Title: Orange
Loved the "I'm trying not to be line"--by far my favorite so far
can't wait to read more soon
Author's Response: I'm working on what direction I want it to go in right now. Jenna's recent comment about them not belonging together is wreaking havoc on my psyche, so it may be a few days.
Date: March 30, 2007 10:19 am Title: Orange
I'm really enjoying this. Its bittersweet and painful, but so wonderfully written.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. Writing this much pain is actually quite cathartic, I definitely recommend it.