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Reviewer: CashBasket Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: October 15, 2007 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 2: Four Times Pam Almost Called Off Her Wedding

the last section puts a gut-wrenchingly poignant ending to pam's unhappiness. sad, but well-deserved.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 27, 2007 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 2: Four Times Pam Almost Called Off Her Wedding

Pam had it rough. I am so glad she did call off her wedding. I mean, Roy did so many things to her that just aren't right, but she ended it. And a year later, she can be happy.

Reviewer: Rowena666 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 2: Four Times Pam Almost Called Off Her Wedding

Wow. Loved both chapters- the whole theme of 'what could have been' and near misses on this show is just so heart-breaking, and you captured that mood really well.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2007 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 2: Four Times Pam Almost Called Off Her Wedding

The second vignette here is the most painful to read, because we all know that Roy's computer is probably still loaded with porn. Both of these short stories are excellent!


Author's Response: It's true; Toby's not the only "skeevy little perv."  Thanks for giving these a second read :)

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