10 [Report This]Date: August 27, 2007 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yet another story I believe I read on FFN, but too lazy to check, and does it really matter if I reread it? Not to me, so whatever.
Haha! I am pretty sure Phyllis and Bob Vance, Vance Refridgeration enjoyed that toast more than the craziness that Michael did in the real episode. So I think all involved would probably enjoy this more than reality (as much as a fictional show can count as reality).
Wow, karen in Curls... I can't picture it at all!
I don't like dancing. I am probably one of the few girls who find it absolutely awful. however... dancing with Jim... I think I could get used to that.
Oh yeah, I did read that. And what I love is how so in character it all is, because, even like the little things like the two thumbs up from Jim as Kelly and Pam go to the boquet and stuff. Awesomeness.
Date: April 03, 2007 06:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh no. I had women fight for my bouquet at my wedding. Hopefully the better person who get it. Can't wait to find out.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Date: April 02, 2007 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
A Roy-less Phyllis' Wedding---fabulous...keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
10 [Report This]Date: April 02, 2007 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
My dear ms. Wendy Blue--two words, I have for you:
Keep writing!
Author's Response: Well it's actually already written, so win win win! It'll be up soon, thanks doof!
Date: April 02, 2007 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story. You did a great job of setting the mood. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! It'll be up soon!
Date: April 02, 2007 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked this so much, that after I finished reading it, I flipped back to the main story page to see if "Yes" or "No" was listed under "Completed:"
Yay...we'll get more! Can't wait!
Author's Response: Yes you will get more! Sooner rather than later since all the chapters have been written. Thanks for reading!
Date: April 02, 2007 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
So cute! I really liked :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it!
Date: April 02, 2007 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
GAH! best. cliffhanger. EVER!!! you're updating again in, what? 5 minutes???
seriously though, this is a really great fic so far. i like your writing style. you captured my attention from the very beginning. great job.
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! Lucky for you, I actually wrote all of the chapters awhile ago, so it won't take as long for me to update. But I have to leave you hanging for a little bit, just for fun ;) Thanks again for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: April 02, 2007 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Cat fight!!!!
Author's Response: Haha, no kidding! That's actually what happens in the next chapter: Karen and Pam duking it out in a big vat of jello....okay not really. Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: April 02, 2007 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I love this! xD I thought this was a oneshot - I'm awful at reading the things below the title and rating - but now I'm excited for the next installment.
Hey, did the bouquet land in Pam's hands first? Because I can't imagine her grappling for it, seeing as she wasn't very enthusiastic anyways.
It's still awesome.
Author's Response: Yay, I'm so glad you're liking it! About the bouquet...ummm...sure why not? Honestly I didn't really think about it; the image that I came up with when I wrote it was Karen and Pam both reaching half-heartedly for it and it magically landing in each of their hands. Far-fetched? Maybe. But that's the beauty of fanfiction right ;)? Thanks again for reading!
Date: April 02, 2007 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
fight! fight! fight! fight! ~Jim
I wish the episode had been more like this, although Ryan hitting the flowers away from Kelly was priceless.
I really liked your characterizations and the conversations between the characters. One tiny criticism- way too many fics have dresses hugging women in all the right places. It jerks me out of the story when I read it.
I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you're enjoying it! And your critique is duly noted; that description just comes from me being unable to describe any part of the anatomy without blushing profusely ;) Thanks again reading!