Date: January 16, 2008 12:47 am Title: Chapter 5
Gotta love a little Toby hating!!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 27, 2007 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 5
Its so funny, that date was all sorts of awful, but it was still great.
Jim is so sweet.
Date: April 06, 2007 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh, so lovely. Another great chapter. This line was so perfectly Jim:
“Or you can invade my privacy, sure.”
You do their dialogue so well; it's very authentic and believable. Good job!!
Author's Response: That means so much to me! The writers are genius so the fact that you think I can capture the dialogue they write so well means the world. Thanks again!
Date: April 06, 2007 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 5
Awww. Jim takes care of sick Pam! And Michael makes inappropriate sexual comments about Pam! Love it. More, please?
Author's Response: More is on the way! Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: April 06, 2007 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 5
AW !!!! Please more, I love this story!! It's all too cute!
Author's Response: There's more to come! Thanks for reading!
Date: April 06, 2007 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aww, I miss the Jim who would make soup for Pam and bring her Gatorade....
Author's Response: Me and the rest of America feel the same way, Lisa. Thanks for reading!