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Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07, 2007 08:29 am Title: Chapter 1

How happy am I to pop in here and find a juicy new girl7 story - and with 9 chapters left? Right off the bat - what a spot-on description this is:

the feeling you get when you think you've accidentally sent a private email to the entire office 

Also, when Jim's eyes flicker to Pam's for that split second before Roy goes after him - that being their only direct (yes, oddly intimate) acknowledgement of that night - those were precisely my thoughts when I saw it. Love seeing it articulated so well. This one is off to a particularly good/riveting start...please be merciful and update soon!



Author's Response:

And how happy I am to find a review from you so fast! 

Glad you agreed about the look - I held my breath for both of them at that moment, and oddly, it struck me as almost more dramatic than Roy lunging at him was.  

I've got the next three chapters done and was going to hold on to them, tinker with them, but I went ahead and posted the next two.  The fourth should be up shortly.  (And then I'm off to spend two hours grading, blah.)  Hopefully I can knock most of this one out this weekend, though; the story will not leave me alone!

Thanks, as always, for being such an awesome reviewer, my friend! 

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07, 2007 08:15 am Title: Chapter 1

Ooooh, bitch is maaaad.  This is interesting!  I like how you've filled in the blanks on that scene and I'm really interested to see where this goes.  You know I love your stuff, anyway, so, yea.  Can't wait to read more!!

Author's Response:

Thanks, GreenFish!  And yeah...bitch is maaaad indeed. :O) I won't be writing crazy Karen (or even all-out bitch Karen), but believe me, she's had just about enough Pam-related revelations.  

I'll be updating again really soon - thanks for reviewing!

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