8 [Report This]Date: April 16, 2007 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 1: A Few Good Men
I love your talking heads - especially Meredith's "I was a big fan of last year’s event. I don’t remember a lot of it…but from what I hear, I had a really good time." and Karen's about Pam and Jim being friends. Nope, no reason to be awkward at all!
Author's Response: Haha, I'm really glad you like them, they're so much fun to write! Thanks for reading!
Date: April 09, 2007 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 1: A Few Good Men
No, there's no reason for it to be awkward... well, maybe there's reason...
I liked this a lot; it seemed really in-character:
“But as Colonel, I feel—“
“Assistant to the—wait what?” Michael began to respond out of habit..."
I think I'll go see what happens next.
Date: April 09, 2007 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 1: A Few Good Men
Man, I'm really enjoying your Dwight! Great voice, with the "Stratego" at home and "You're either with us or against us." Pefect! I could hear Dwight saying all these things. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Date: April 09, 2007 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 1: A Few Good Men
Man, I'm really enjoying your Dwight! Great voice, with the "Stratego" at home and "You're either with us or against us." Pefect! I could hear Dwight saying all these things. Looking forward to more!
10 [Report This]Date: April 09, 2007 09:19 am Title: Chapter 1: A Few Good Men
Okay this was hilarious. The ending was fantastic. I loved Jim the Lieutenant! Now I have a very strong need to see John in uniform. Oh boy.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it. More to come soon!
Date: April 09, 2007 04:52 am Title: Chapter 1: A Few Good Men
Have you been working on your vertical pushups :P
Author's Response: Haha, not yet. Soon though! Thanks for reading!
Date: April 08, 2007 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 1: A Few Good Men
You are a very talented writer. This dialogue is spot on, and I love the little talking heads you've included. Dwight, Jim, Michael, Pam... really there doesn't seem to be anyone you can't write.
“Oh my God,” he said quietly. “We’re going to war.”
That line was the first time I laughed out loud.
“No, you know what Jim, we can’t have this kind of mutiny already. You’re either with us or against us.”
That was the second time.
“And frankly, I don’t appreciate that kind of talk from a subordinate.”
And after this part it was pretty much all over for me. HiLARious!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! Seriously, the writers of this show are gods in my opinion and the fact that you think I'm staying true to the characters they write for really means a lot to me. Thanks so much for reading!
Date: April 08, 2007 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 1: A Few Good Men
I love it. Your Dwight is dead on--I was actually laughing out loud! Actually, all your voices are authentic. Great job. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Dwight is so fun to write and I'm really happy to hear that you think I do him justice. Thanks for reading!
Date: April 08, 2007 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 1: A Few Good Men
This is delightful. I would be interested to see where it is going.
Author's Response: There's more to come! Thanks for reading!