Date: April 11, 2007 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 4: "Friendly" Competition
"the few, the proud…the not-so-many" - awesome.
Dwight's Talking Head about gruel and prune juice was very Dwight, right down to the "satisfied look".
My one nitpick is that Karen seems to be very competitive. Call of Duty KarentheJimSlayer, anyone? Her "Call of Duuuuty!" TH in... one of the early Season3 episodes. And A Benihana Christmas dueling parties.
I love that Jim got "caught" watching Pam...!
I'll stay with you; get to the updates when you can. And remember, grades and crap like that are important! (They really are.)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I suppose I should have clarified that Karen was playing along as though she wasn't competitive, even though it's very obvious that she is. Good eye though, I'm sure it'll save me in future chapters. Thanks again!
Date: April 11, 2007 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 4: "Friendly" Competition
At first I thought of just playing Tag but come on, what are we, kids?
HAHAHA!
“I’m afraid I can’t disclose that information. It’s classified,” Jim said with mock seriousness.
Hee! So very Jim! Love it!
Author's Response: So glad you do :) Thanks for reading!
Date: April 11, 2007 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 4: "Friendly" Competition
I've just read the first 4 chapters and I'm really enjoying this. What a great situation to put the "gang" in. I love your characterizations of Dwight and Michael. Buyer beware...hah!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you're having fun reading (I'm sure having fun writing)!