7 [Report This]Date: April 16, 2007 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 5: Attack!
Seems like Karen and Jim have differing ideas as to the near future. Karen seems happy to be moving to NY but Jim seems to be happy playing with Pam's ball o'socks. Good luck with your finals but please do update as soon as you can!
Date: April 14, 2007 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 5: Attack!
I'll give you a reaason to smile, then. My favorite part is that the DI loves Rachel Ray. It is amazing.
Author's Response: That does make me smile :) Thanks for reading!
Date: April 13, 2007 01:54 am Title: Chapter 5: Attack!
Jim in pj's + Pam in pj's + toppling over + playful wrestling = perfection
Author's Response: If only we could see something like this on the show *le sigh* Glad you liked it!
Date: April 12, 2007 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 5: Attack!
I read this today at work... and my work is not happy work ... But I couldn't help but laugh out loud.
The talk heads were so funny. I think it is always a good time when the Office staff goes out in public. especially when they have to spend the night somewhere...
Looking forward to the next chapters... Good Luck on your finals... been there done that... I miss it!
Author's Response: Aww I'm glad my fic could help make work a little bit better! Thanks for reading!
Date: April 12, 2007 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 5: Attack!
Um, OK..."I love the Food Network" and "What in the name of Rachel Ray" are two of the funniest lines I've ever read in fic - ever. Thanks for the laugh.
Author's Response: Haha I'm so glad! He's a fun one to write for :) Thanks for reading!
Date: April 12, 2007 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 5: Attack!
Oooh, Michael's in troooouble!
And so are Jim and Pam! But it was worth it. That tiny little close, tense moment was hot!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Date: April 12, 2007 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 5: Attack!
"What in the name of Rachel Ray is going on here?" Brilliant and subtle nod to the Sargent's predilection for cooking shows. This was a very strong chapter, and I liked the sudden tension brought up by the possible move to New York. What may have started out as an experiment in battling writer's block is turning into a Wendy Blue classic! Way to go!
Date: April 12, 2007 09:56 am Title: Chapter 5: Attack!
YOU HAVE FINALS NEXT WEEK? I have them... um, after that. In May. They deserve to die. *kills all finals* there we go, all better now.
Eew, Michael with BO. There is an image (Smell) I would rather not have.
MOVE TO NEW YORK!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!? What are you doing to me, trying to give me a heart attack!
Although, I gotta say "armed with a shoe" is so oddly funny I couldn't stop laughing
Angela brought Holy Water... haha
Cute Jam moment :) they should have ignored Sergeant Miller. Although I think I would laugh at "What in the name of Rachel Ray"
Yay I make your eyes look like an equal sign
Author's Response: I'm pretty sure that was the most enthusiastic review I've ever gotten, so yay for you! So glad you liked this chapter, and the Great New York Mystery will be cleared up soon. Thanks for reading!
Date: April 12, 2007 06:38 am Title: Chapter 5: Attack!
Hmm... Jim is being so friendly with Pam and has kept the socks as a little memento, but he's moving with Karen to NY? I don't get that. Maybe that will become more clear to me as we go on.
But no matter, because... I'm enjoying this. I liked the banter about demotion, the stiletto heel, Jim thinking about Pam's nightgown, Angela (things that are awesome, BTW), Jim and Pam having physical contact, and "Phyllis, with a look of delight on her face continued to chase after him with a soap-filled loufa sponge." Also, I liked that Pam is pissed off at Jim about NY.
I hope I made you smile like this =).
Author's Response: I promise the whole NY thing will make sense in chapters to come, just sit tight! Really glad you enjoyed this chapter, it was a lot of fun to write! Thanks for reading!