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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2007 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this was such a beautiful and heartbreaking story. So sad and so raw and honest too.  I can definitely see Roy reacting the way he did - and as sad as it made me, I can also see how Jim reacted the way he did, too.  This line was so sad - "I’ve gotten into enough trouble chasing what I want, so I sit silently, stationary at my desk, thinking about all I had and everything that could have been." I  truly loved this and it's going right into my favorites.  

Reviewer: Night Swept Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2007 11:51 am Title: Chapter 1

This is very well written and has an almost poetic flow to it.  Your take on post-CN is very creative and realistic too.  Great Job!

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