Date: December 05, 2007 01:24 pm Title: The Vances Are Suprised
You morphed the ride home and the accompanying conversation so perfectly. Maybe the most memorable lines in that original scene are Anne admitting to her chattiness, but Pam just wouldn't be chatty, and you did a perfect job of toning down that aspect while keeping up the friendly, dreamy aspects of the "joint" character's personalities.
Date: April 19, 2007 11:38 am Title: The Vances Are Suprised
I am enjoying this so much! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks!!! I'm writing as fast as stolen time from work permits!
Date: April 19, 2007 08:41 am Title: The Vances Are Suprised
Lovely! Hm, so Kelly is Diana:) The thought of Pam being a poor little orphan kind of makes me want to cry... I can't wait for another chapter:)
Author's Response:
Kelly is kind of Diana by necessity, but she is very Diana like, I think! I'm so glad you're liking this!
Date: April 18, 2007 10:52 pm Title: The Vances Are Suprised
This is just perfection! Perfect melding of the two. Loving it so far!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!!
Date: April 18, 2007 07:57 pm Title: The Vances Are Suprised
Yay for more of this! And Kelly Barry??? Genius! I snorted aloud when I read it.
Author's Response: Ha, thanks, Azlin! I'm glad you like it! :-)
Date: April 18, 2007 07:03 pm Title: The Vances Are Suprised
I was wondering who would be Diana. The idea of little Kelly and Pam is so cute :)
Author's Response: I think so too! Thanks for the review!