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Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2007 09:36 pm Title: Vanity and Vexation of Spirit

A small part of herself wanted to forgive him, especially when his voice cracked as he said her name.

Oh, Pammy.  Whom among us is immune to The Crack?

(And that.. sounds dirty.  Didn't mean to.)

I missed this chapter!  Now I get to read a couple in a row!  Yippee! 



Author's Response: Oh, the Crack. She will learn in time that it is an amazing thing.
I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Azlin Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2007 01:04 pm Title: Vanity and Vexation of Spirit

:D This is me with a big dorky smile on my face. This chapter just made me snort out loud in the middle of the university library, but it was so worth it!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!! More will follow soon....

Reviewer: thedominantmalekitty Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 02:16 pm Title: Vanity and Vexation of Spirit

Love the Pam and Jim interaction you've got going here.  Very nice way to introduce the "joking around" aspect of their relationship while not abandoning the Anne/Gil fight so early.

Candy beans?  I think I love you .



Author's Response: Thanks! I would give you many candy beans if I had them :-)

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 02:07 pm Title: Vanity and Vexation of Spirit

You're so good at this.  Dwighde smells like beets.  Katy as Josie.  Everything is falling into place so nicely.  Really great job.  More please!!!! 

Author's Response: Thanks, Krissy!

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