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Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2007 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 3 - A yearning for pure potash

You're painting a very rich picture here; I really like the detail.  I like how James son of Halpert is intrigued by the girl he almost smiled at.


Author's Response: Yeah, well, she's the girl. Gotta be intrigued by the girl.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2007 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 3 - A yearning for pure potash

Muggins, how do you do it?  This is amazing!  James, the knight in not quite shining armor.  Le sigh.

And I grin like an idiot each time a new character is introduced.  Hee! 



Author's Response: I'm dying trying to figure out how to fit in Dwight Schrute. It's such a German name. I'm going to have to get pretty creative on that one... luckily he's not showing up until the knights enter the lists, so I have some time to figure it out.

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