Date: May 05, 2007 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 4 - The prophecy of the Scottish Knight
Does Anne the servant have a cat named Ash?
I like the part with the slippers. It's too bad she can't just tell Roy that she kissed the knight. He'd throw his tankard of ale at something and she'd be done. Although she might be branded and run out of town or something, so... probably not good.
Author's Response:
Why yes Anne does! It's named after the ashes of the church. As is Cinders and Smoke.
If she told Roy that she kissed the knight by all the rights of chivalry he would be allowed to pierce her organs with his sword. Of course, Pam's brothers and fathers would then kill Roy. And then the Earl of Nuneaton would bring his army to bear..... So you're right.... not good.
Date: May 02, 2007 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 4 - The prophecy of the Scottish Knight
I know this doesn't add much from my last review, but holy smokes, I am FLOORED by your writing. Wowsa. The details about everyday life, the characters and their hard freaking lives are all so detailed and true to the period (as far as I know, heck!). To quote Pam in 'The Convict', *surprised grin* "Wow!"
Author's Response: The lives were amazingly hard. If a person lived to 30 they were amazingly lucky! Everyday in every way I am glad I live in the 21st century and that I own a toilet. God bless toilets.
Date: May 02, 2007 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 4 - The prophecy of the Scottish Knight
Oooh, I love this! It's very different, but the characterizations are still on. I've always liked stories about this time period :-)
Author's Response: I love this time period too! Thank you for reading!