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Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2007 11:19 pm Title: I Left Outlets Hidden Underneath Your Thighs

Ooh:

That boyish look leaves his face and instead his expression openly admits that he’d do anything to have you right now.

That is exactly what it looked like in the scene.  Exactly.  Great job! 



Author's Response: Thanks! This is quite possibly my favorite Jam scene ever, (including Casino Night!) So, I'm glad you thought it was true to the scene. ;)

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2007 03:20 pm Title: I Left Outlets Hidden Underneath Your Thighs

Wow.  Nice.  Especially "That boyish look leaves his face and instead his expression openly admits that he’d do anything to have you right now." Go for it, kids.

I don't get the chapter title, but it sounds kinda dirty.  Dirty's good, but I'm not sure it quite matches. 



Author's Response: You should youtube the song! It's good. Last I checked youtube only had a couple of Chin Up, Chin Up songs, but I know that's one of them. I'd look up the video you recced, but tragically I'm on a school computer and youtube is blocked. :( I definitely want to watch it though because I love, love, love that scene. Thanks for the review!

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