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Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 17, 2024 12:47 am Title: Harnesses That Can't Hold Weight

A fantastic whirlwind through the heavy romantic tension between Jim and Pam during Booze Cruise! One of the many "moments" so obvious that we must accept why they would just as soon brush them under the carpet moments later. Great work!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2007 06:04 pm Title: Harnesses That Can't Hold Weight

why you should self pimp, if only through facebook - it gets you a review :D.

god, never has there been 900 painfully well written words... especially not only spanning 27 seconds.

i need to find a way to attach a video to this review, because this (gestures wildly with hands) is what my heart feels like. its like this, and then this, and then its just gah!!!!

what would have happened if they had kissed that night? I mean, whoa, that would have been so different. how could she not kiss him. i mean, its jim! oh pam, pam pam.... you so wanted to. see. you so did.

so amazing.

will reply to your message (eventually)... but when i read it i just had to go find it. and now i am writing a bit also. so yay for that.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! It's so fun to get a review for something that you wrote so long ago, because I always worry that my older stuff isn't as good, you know? Anyway, thanks again for putting up with me lately! LLOFC members unite!!! ;)

Reviewer: naomi_dylan Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 10:04 pm Title: Harnesses That Can't Hold Weight

This was really cool!


Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 04:25 pm Title: Harnesses That Can't Hold Weight

The idea of Pam shivering because she's actually thinking about kissing Jim is awesome.  I'll never think of that scene in the same way again :)



Author's Response: To be honest part of the inspiration for this story came from a quote I remember hearing Jenna give (can't remember where...) about how during this scene she felt like Pam was thinking "if you try to kiss me now I'm not going to stop you." I just loved that, and I'm still thinking if only he had!!! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2007 11:22 pm Title: Harnesses That Can't Hold Weight

You know what?  I think it is possible to kiss someone without really kissing him.  Because it really felt that way in this story.  Sigh.  So much potential in those two!  They need to just jump on that!

Author's Response: Yeah no kidding! Someone should just sit them both down and make them listen to each other for like 30 seconds and then suddenly everything would be solved! Anyways, in the meantime I'd actually be okay with them not being together if it was more a season 2 non-togetherness than a season 3 kind. ;)

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2007 10:05 pm Title: Harnesses That Can't Hold Weight

These were wonderful. I enjoyed revisiting those sweet, sweet season 2 days.


Author's Response: I know, I love season 2! And I've been so depressed by all the angst lately that I had to go back to that little fantasy world, even though it turned out to be kind of angsty when I got there too. But it was a better kind of angst, you know?

Reviewer: the_squirrel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2007 08:49 pm Title: Harnesses That Can't Hold Weight

for a while i had no idea what this was about but it intriged me. but the ending is so beautiful. i love it

Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate hearing that. :)

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