Date: May 30, 2007 04:31 pm Title: then and now
VERY NICE. Loved it. I actaully really liked the style of going back and forth... :) Keep it up! I hope to see more from you!
Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate the review, and I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: May 29, 2007 10:39 am Title: then and now
Hum, this is not related to the story at all, but you know when you hover over some things, it says something right near the little mouse thing? Well, as the page was loading this chapter, it said "clean up messy code" near the mouse. and that confused me... hum.... oh well. I can ignore it!
"How could he be so perfect? He was everything. He was funny and smart and ridiculously good-looking and on top of all that he was the best friend she’d ever had."
I know, damn him! Any relationship I have now will henceforth be compared to Jim. Seriously, I read the Mean Magazine article this morning, and its just like, GAH, he is perfect even as John! Wow, am I getting a bit to obsessive fangirl crazy? See, moments like this are when i realize I need a life OUTSIDE of The Office and Fanfiction, and maybe interact with the real people every once in a while...
I loved Pam thinking about the future with Jim... so great.
Okay, so, besides the fact that this firmly cemented the fact that I will be
1) grinning like a fool all afternoon
2) thinking about JAM all afternoon
this was awesome.
Now really, I have to go out and face the real world, because yeah, it doesn't care if I want to read fanfic, no, it says calls need to be made and letters mailed and things returned. Darnit real life.
Author's Response:
What? There's life outside The Office? Insert my sombrero-snort of doubt here.
And oh yes, that Mean Magazine article was completely HOT. Sigh. I'm in love--again. Or maybe still. Who cares? He's awesome. :)
Thanks for the reviews. I'm so glad you liked this!
Date: May 28, 2007 11:35 am Title: then and now
I love this. You've captured their newvousness and excitement so well. I love how Pam keeps playing the date in her head. Simply lovely.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it. I know if I was Pam, I would totally be doing that all night long!
Date: May 25, 2007 02:17 pm Title: then and now
So nice! I love where she's envisioning her marriage and her future with Jim, and realizing that she didn't envision that with Roy, even before.
I like how he holds her as she cries.
The back and forth between now and earlier in the day is good and very clear. And again, you are the best self-beta'r ever.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks. I try, but even as an editing student there's stuff that I'm prone to miss. That's why betas are the best EVER!!! Woo!! Okay, seriously though, thanks for the review. You (and everyone who reviews, really) make The Office worth writing about. :)
Date: May 24, 2007 06:19 pm Title: then and now
AZLIN! This is simply lovely. I love the flash backs and the total insight to pam's feeling. This is as good as a very good thing!
Author's Response: Oh, McGigi, you're making me blush. Seriously though, I had a lot of fun with this, even if it was a little over-the-top sap-happy toward the end. ;) Feel better soon!
Date: May 23, 2007 09:58 pm Title: then and now
Ok...I'm crying. Maybe it is because it's one in the morning, and I should be sleeping and all, but the lines about their future and watching their daughter graduate from college=me crying like a baby. This was so sweet and lovely! Fantastic work :)
Author's Response:
*passes tissue to dramaqueen* I honestly didn't plan this as a tear-jerker, but I think it ended up that way because I was just so happy for them. Anyway, thanks for the review. I'm really glad you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2007 03:24 pm Title: then and now
This is great! I really like the story and the way you told it. It was neat to read Pam's reactions to the date along with the date. Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I really liked writing it, though I kind of think it might have gone a little too sappy toward the end. Oh well.