Reviews For It's Just a Ride
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Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2007 12:25 pm Title: It's so full of change

Aw, I love Jim grabbing Pam's hand and explaining that it's okay because "It's a daaate."  Hee!  So cute.

Reviewer: jacsonian Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2007 03:47 am Title: It's so full of change

This is excellent! Please don't make us wait too long before posting again, I can't wait for some Jam date banter!

I love it all, so it was difficult to pick a favourite, but for some reason I really love this line:

"He couldn’t tell if it was working."

Anyway, please post again soon, I'm loving this to pieces! Excellent job. 

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I should have more by the weekend. I've got a busy Thursday and Friday but I will definitely put up SOMETHING.

I really loved that line too. It was an unintentional double meaning.

Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2007 09:51 am Title: It's so full of change

Just the right amount of "awkwardness" balanced by the easy rapport they have always ( well almost always) had with one another.  And a very simple but meaningful date with your choice of "Cujino's"...I like it!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2007 09:18 am Title: It's so full of change

Nice.  Glad to know there's a bit more coming! (TWSS)

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2007 09:49 pm Title: It's so full of change

Love love love how the nerves are showing through.  And great job dealing with the Karen situation.  I hope you keep writing!

Reviewer: Cate the Great Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2007 09:23 pm Title: It's so full of change

Cute! Kepp going!

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2007 08:49 pm Title: It's so full of change

Ah! I love the awkward hug at the end.  That's the most embarassing thing.  Good chapter :)

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